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Discussion Text: Writing 2 Task

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General Statement            :
 Does everyone think that continue education to the college is very useful in our life? Many people think that continuing education is integrated where you live and work because it seeks to provide life-long learning opportunities for social workers and other professionals to enhance their knowledge and skills; to help them meet state licensing requirements. However, it also has pessimistical opinions of the society.
       I.        Arguments For            :
1.      By continuing education to the college, we can get insight knowledge because we face knowledgable people around the college.
2.      It helps us to be a professional workers because it provides specially majors.
3.      Graduation of the college is ready to face job competition in the future.
    II.            Arguments Againsts   :
1.      Continuing education to the college is expensive and cannot be achieved by every society level.
2.      It shows social discrepancy.
3.      It makes people become more dependent because it helps people to be professional worker not to be professional leader. It means most of the graduations of college choose to apply a job more than open a job vacancy.
 III.            Conclusion and Recommendation:
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons about continuing education. Whether you want to continue education or not, it is important to think that continuing education to the college cannot make sure you can get a good job in the future if you are not truly in doing it. Research shows that some of unemployments are from scholars. If you want to be useful in the society you have to be a professional worker and also professional leader. I think it will be better if you continue your education while following organizations to train your leadership skill.


Name  : Asrida Wiwi
NIM    : 1200967
Class   : K1/2012

Revision 3


Pro and Con About Studying to The College

Does everyone think that studying to the college is very useful in this life? It is not wise to judge whether it is useful or not because everything in this world must have useful matter. It just considers whether it has more useful matter or more useless. Some people think that studying to the college is important for this life because their education refers to their success. In addition, educated people will be respected by the society and vice versa. However, this case also rises pessimistical opinions of the society. This passage will show you the pros and cons about continuing education to the college.
Many people think that studying to the college is integrated where you live and work. It seeks to provide life-long learning opportunities for social workers and other professionals to enhance their knowledge and skills; to help them meet state licensing requirements. People also say that by studying to the college, we can get insight knowledge because we face knowledgeable people around the college. Furthermore, college provides special majors that can help people get ready to face job competition in the future.
However, it also gets pessimistical opinions of the society. They think that studying to the college is very expensive and cannot be achieved by some society levels. It is believed that it shows social discrepancy which causes pressure to the low society level. In addition, it makes people become more dependent because it helps people to be professional worker not to be professional leader because fact shows that most of the graduations of college choose to apply a job more than open a job vacancy, especially people who graduated from education major.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons about studying to the college. Whether you want to continue education or not, it is important to think that continuing education to the college cannot ensure that you can get a good job in the future if you are not seriously in doing it. It is because research shows that some of unemployments are from scholars. If you want to be useful in the society, you have to be a professional worker and also professional leader. In this case, I emphasize that it will be better if you study to the college while following organizations to train your leadership skill.

REFERENCES
Refnaldi. (2010). Essay Writing. A process genre based approach: Universitas Negeri Padang.
Oshima, Alice.& Hogue, Ann. (2006). Writing Academic English, fourth edition.
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7 komentar:

  1. It's a nice issue wiwi. I like it.
    However, I think the letter of your essay is too small to read, it's difficult for me to read it. It would be better if you write it bigger.
    Keep writing

    BalasHapus
  2. it's a good essay and your topic also great. however, in your conclusion, i don't see in what side that you stand for actually. I suggest you to mention it :)

    BalasHapus
  3. Good story.. complete process,, fabulous wiwi...

    you must pay attention punctuation,, you can add or upload a image in your writing( Discussion essay)..
    keep smile, fighting,, GANBATTE!!

    BalasHapus
  4. owh I see,,, thanks a lot for your comments guys. They really help my writing to be better. ;D

    BalasHapus
  5. Nice topic to be discussed...
    I agree with Nur Mukhlisah' comment..
    ^keep writing^

    BalasHapus
  6. good idea for the topic,, should we continue our study in college or not

    BalasHapus