General Statement :
Does everyone think
that continue education to the college is very useful in our life? Many people
think that continuing education is integrated where you live and work because
it seeks to provide life-long learning opportunities for social workers and
other professionals to enhance their knowledge and skills; to help them meet
state licensing requirements. However, it also has pessimistical opinions of
the society.
I.
Arguments For :
1. By continuing education to the college, we can get insight knowledge
because we face knowledgable people around the college.
2. It helps us to be a professional workers because it provides specially
majors.
3. Graduation of the college is ready to face job competition in the future.
II.
Arguments Againsts :
1. Continuing education to the college is expensive and cannot be achieved by
every society level.
2. It shows social discrepancy.
3. It makes people become more dependent because it helps people to be
professional worker not to be professional leader. It means most of the
graduations of college choose to apply a job more than open a job vacancy.
III.
Conclusion and Recommendation:
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons about
continuing education. Whether you want to continue education or not, it is
important to think that continuing education to the college cannot make sure
you can get a good job in the future if you are not truly in doing it. Research
shows that some of unemployments are from scholars. If you want to be useful in
the society you have to be a professional worker and also professional leader.
I think it will be better if you continue your education while following
organizations to train your leadership skill.
Name : Asrida Wiwi
NIM : 1200967
Class : K1/2012
Revision 3
Pro and Con About Studying to The College
Many people think that studying to the college is integrated where you live
and work. It seeks to provide life-long learning opportunities for social
workers and other professionals to enhance their knowledge and skills; to help
them meet state licensing requirements. People also say that by studying to the
college, we can get insight knowledge because we face knowledgeable people
around the college. Furthermore, college provides special majors that can help
people get ready to face job competition in the future.
However, it also gets pessimistical opinions of the society. They think
that studying to the college is very expensive and cannot be achieved by some
society levels. It is believed that it shows social discrepancy which causes
pressure to the low society level. In addition, it makes people become more
dependent because it helps people to be professional worker not to be professional
leader because fact shows that most of the graduations of college choose to
apply a job more than open a job vacancy, especially people who graduated from
education major.
In conclusion, there are both pros and cons about studying to the college.
Whether you want to continue education or not, it is important to think that
continuing education to the college cannot ensure that you can get a good job
in the future if you are not seriously in doing it. It is because research
shows that some of unemployments are from scholars. If you want to be useful in
the society, you have to be a professional worker and also professional leader.
In this case, I emphasize that it will be better if you study to the college
while following organizations to train your leadership skill.
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Refnaldi. (2010). Essay Writing. A
process genre based approach: Universitas Negeri Padang.
Oshima, Alice.& Hogue, Ann. (2006). Writing
Academic English, fourth edition.
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It's a nice issue wiwi. I like it.
BalasHapusHowever, I think the letter of your essay is too small to read, it's difficult for me to read it. It would be better if you write it bigger.
Keep writing
it's a good essay and your topic also great. however, in your conclusion, i don't see in what side that you stand for actually. I suggest you to mention it :)
BalasHapusGood story.. complete process,, fabulous wiwi...
BalasHapusyou must pay attention punctuation,, you can add or upload a image in your writing( Discussion essay)..
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owh I see,,, thanks a lot for your comments guys. They really help my writing to be better. ;D
BalasHapusnice story wiwi,,, keep writing :)
BalasHapusNice topic to be discussed...
BalasHapusI agree with Nur Mukhlisah' comment..
^keep writing^
good idea for the topic,, should we continue our study in college or not
BalasHapus